now dissin THUMPER

yo rhymes was weak,
soft like a wet rose petal
bitch got his name from a game
playin da old twisted metal
remember thumper? his car was purple
nigga i'll hurt, yo momma need 2 re-birth u
cuz ya rhymes aint neva alive
it already seen da light ( died )
you know they told ya a lie
if they said ya rhymes is tight
quit now and make u a alias
maybe u should name him mr grimm ( twisted metal star )
cuz ya punches jus swing and miss
ya need 2 die jus like him ( mr. grimm )

yea b4 da next person dissme tell me if it was ok...