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Old 08-01-04, 12:23 AM   #8
~Luciano~
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Sweat released and pouring out of me as if I were a faucet--
First time at this and struggling to succeed so i fought it--
5/10
I feel the tension in my quads as i slide in and out of the hole--
And how she moaned with emotion it had me out of control--
5/10
To perfect this moment was tough but i still would tried my best--
To give her the pleasure of a queen and take burdens off her chest---
6/10
And the morning after was harder to slip out without a trace--
To think what a dirty mess of cum i had left on her face--
5/10
Walked slowly so the boards wouldnt creak in the hall--
Cause this shit, for me, was the toughest booty call--
5/10

discrimination is my number one enemy will it ever desist?
I scream out in every night in agony can it ever persist
7/10
I hold the pain in till I burst with nothing left to sustain
I pray to god to let me die this hate I can not contain
6/10
My heart tells me to go on and commit a easily done sucide
but I'm afraid if I sin I won't go to Heaven that I despise
7/10
but still...I have a family to support and a job to work...
I can not leave them alone to perish even if I go berserk
7/10
to my children I will not find the evil to ever be heartless
even with fiends terrorizing my life, death I will not possess
7/10


Came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay
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