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Old 08-01-04, 02:21 AM   #17
~Luciano~
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Voted For: Cerulean



I expose foes & throw em in a aybss of blackness
How funny, found your Family Tree is the Root to wackness,
6/10
A win?Can't hav this, chances are slimmer then paper
& against me, you'll never see it like a German rapper,
6/10
I'll smack ya, till your innards split & you piss yourself
& your gay, hang off boys ass more then pants w/ no belt,
6/10
If skills were wealth, then your rhymes homeless clearly
So poor infact it seeks assitance from the Salivation Army,
6/10
Blah that was wack, never thought I'd stoop so low
Go on Suvivor though.... on here?you'll see no vote,
5/10

Kid's goin AMOK battlin me, went hyper and shat his diaper
A lyrical case of A.D.D., control yaself and u might flow tighter
6/10
Judging by ya name I bet you go wildin out straight crazy
But even if ya words were charged ya'd still not ever "faze" me
6/10
Responding to my challenge u treadin a really thin line AMOK
Ya ego vs. my brains is balancin an elefant on a hammock
7/10
Spendin hours thinkin up watery lines prolly gives this dude a kick
My own style comes naturally, its findin empty threads thats tha trick
6/10
Think you spit sick? Wait till I've awoken my sleeping demon
I would "punch" you physically but ya bowel's too full o semen
8/10
Ya think your styles insane but "illness" is somethin ya never endured
So Imma striaght rack ya mindgrain till I got this case of "AMOK" cured
7/10

this came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay and complexity and vocab
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