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Old 08-01-04, 02:29 AM   #4
Idyllic Queen
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From: Somewhere over the rainbow...
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I don't know why you couldn't of just posted it here too...my computer doesn't handle links well...but anyways, I guess thats besides that point...

I could relat to this alot...I don't care if you guys think Im psycho...but...I've been cutting myself for nearly two years now. And although I am not crazy about the poem poetically...th meaning of it was sincere and deep...I think you could of used better vocab...so give a bettr visual...have it hit harder...ya know?
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