Blimp

da rulers back so nigga facts i got 2 give//
i run shit, like laxitives//
->>second line too short...it was decent

i understand u hatin cause im hot like i hang wit satin//
da best out theres no debatin//
->>second line too short...weak bar

u don't like it well, i get attention like fights in jails//
flow deep like pipes in wells, u don't like my style tell dis nicca eat ice in hell//
->>ehh..weak

i aint gotta impress u special//( as in retarded)
they hear me like dats who, come and let da god come bless u//
->>doesnt make sense

u need so help, go 2 gunfights and reach 4 ya hip and dis nigga only sqeeze his belt//
->>weak closer it needs another bar



TheOne

Thiz guy right here thinkz he kan beat me
Well i'm gonna stand up and make him see
->>weak opener

That wen ur wid me ur gettin burned
So pay attention, an at the of of skewl i hope u've learned
->>decent

The basicz of rhymin, rappin an a fukin battle
U suk sum cok, actually more then a slut, give her a rattle
->>second bar fell off bad

She comez to the room sukz ma cok again, an ur still tryin to get betta
So i'm gonna waste u now, give u a collision course, put u through the shredda
->>so-so

Ur getin grinded up an learnin ur lesson
I hope u now no how to battle, an no mo r u guess
->>decent


Kinda weak battle but TheOne took it. Blimp you were all over the place you gotta work more on punches. No personals from either end.

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