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Old 08-01-04, 04:58 AM   #11
Magic5
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Voted For: 7*0*8*

7*0*8*
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay is tight...some of ur punches conected...decent personal...

ill bing aka U.G
what the fuck is up with ur structure...dont write in paragraphs yo...flow fell off due to the wackness in structure...no multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals..

Overall
7*0*8* had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals so basing off of that...7*0*8* gets my vote...

VOTE - 7*0*8*

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Thanx.