MARVOLoUsJ1009
structure is pretty good...some of ur lines were a lil stretched though...flow was on target...u had tight multis...wordplay was also tight...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

str8_hood
strucutre is pretty nice as well...flow is on target as well...no multis...wordplay was tight...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a pretty good structure...both had a stable flow...both had tight wordplay...neither had good personals...MARVOLoUsJ1009 had more multis...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...MARVOLoUsJ1009 gets my vote..

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