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Old 08-01-04, 06:19 AM   #1
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This was feedback posted for Mimesis

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mimesis:ur verse was ok...but it was too streched...its like u were focused only on his name....ur punches aint that hard...and as for ur flow i give u a 5...structure was ok...but it think ya gtta work on that a lil more....and i didnt see any wordplay...how come?...ok verse tho
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