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Old 08-01-04, 08:48 AM   #4
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Originally Posted by GFX.
My flow is like gravity....battle fools soft like a cavity/

I'm so bored right now.....i could do tha whole alphabet/

This drop could have been better. Lines like the the two I put up there really didn't make too much sense the way you worded them. Structure was pretty good, so it flowed easy most of the time. Meta's and multis really weren't there too much except for the first two bars. Vocab wasn't that spectacular either. You should improve on that stuff. Just elevate and be easy, son.
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My flow is like gravity-bit from tutorial section nice try new
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