ok.

i liked the first verse ...........it was heart felt,nice flow with a gud structure,
sounds like a decent song so far.

oh..i dnt think the top line below rhymes with anythin?...
the bottom 2 seem to be the rhymin lines.

hmmm.i like it.
i wud suggest uppin the vocab..wit sum more complex wording if poss.
but overall its lookin gud...

nice spit

Goin' crazy, fire blazin in my eyes, all my brain cells have been fried
It's amazing how all these thoughts in my brain surge through my veins
It's fuckin drivin me insane and all of you sadistic bitches are to blame

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free agent