ima break it down as io see it.

triple n.

At ya lyrical peak, ya flows weak, who gave u conceit?
To make ears leak, wit flows that wouldn't fit muted beats
^^flow/multies gud..punch was a decent concept 7/10

U think u betta than rest at best, u can mingle
Ya rhymes so cheesey ya debut's called kraft single
^^maybe not a hard punch,but fummy shit though.!7/10

Ya voice is crap, bores me but cracks too much for a nap
I guess I gotta adapt to hearing screach rap
^^hmm not feelin that 5/10
Have u heard of breath control?....ya gasps are infatic
Did you invent a microphone for asthmatics
haha..again not 2 hard though..7/10
your a lyrical quaker, u ruin tracks & boards every hour
Wit punches like the lakers post game, has no power
^^gud creativity..punch decent 7/10
Whats this about, u either really wack or on a drought
Cuz all ya verses are fliers, distributed to be thrown out
^^again decent 7/10
U raise your verses arabic, this fact can't be denied
Cuz they're all well trained for lyrical suicide
^^ok..not that hot 6/10

overall..32/50....seen beta from you.gud flow/great multies,structure simple and effective.i think sum of your bars were funny if not that hard hittin.
maybe upp personals(although its hard wit this new wack system).

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