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Old 08-01-04, 10:23 AM   #13
MaNiPuLaTiOn
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sorry fucked the post.......

calamity
Go and try to get personals..go ahead check my thread logs..
how you expect to beat a Class-sick. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . when you couldnt even take a hedge-hog..
^^decent opener 7/10
im bout leave your face boned, knuckles to face Calaborations..
this the first time i beat you...my bad theres more occasions..
^^hmm not really feelin this one 5/10
you trip when you write, like you jump roping with tied laces..
......iv seen better "runs for my money", on tv Police chases..
^^ha..quite witty.. 7/10
.... N its not fiction, you know you out of your juristiction..
you couldnt "drive" me away,if you were playin with stick shifts..
^^seemed a lil forced to rhyme 6/10
you wouldnt be "high n mighty", if Muscle bound and catapulted..
im eating him at high altitudes like he was a Turky-Vulture!..
^^hmm..again rhymin was a lil forced.. 6/10
Triple_n, you a triple no body, no one cares 3 times over..
like your shadow was retractable, man you cast is over..
ok closer 6/10

overall 37/60...........
punches not quite as consistent as triple.....overall a nice verse,i felt sum lines were a lil forced to rhyme,other than that i thinjk triple had u a lil on punches

vote triple...
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