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Aight Heres The Breakdown Puerto Your Structure And Flow Suck Fix It No Personals And Your Disses Were Weak But I Liked The Kanya Bar And I Aint Get The Luda Shit?still A Ok Verse.tek Your First Bar Was Hot But People Might Not Get It You Should Have A ()next To Wins That Says Winds In It.2nd Bar Also Hit Hard As For The 3rd That Sars Shit Is Played Out I Wish Niggas Would Quit That Shit And Your Ender Was Weak.your Flow Vocab And Struture Was Good Punches Good And Disses And Personals You Had None.
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Originally Posted by Lyriclesolja
oh and by the way dont ask to battle everyone on here knows thats your only defence..
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AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?
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