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Old 08-01-04, 02:34 PM   #15
~Luciano~
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~IM HERE NOW~is how i check n against diss bastard
~HEY CHECK THIS~was a motherfuckin disaster
6/10
akadafranchise...u must b goin insane
ya rhymes couldn't b ~hard~ if u carve it into ~stone ~dey just strange...
6/10
so go n change...n not clothes im talkin bout ya rap style
da closes u been 2 battle...is watchin da movie ~8MILE~
7/10
n u gotta biten style dat everyone knows of
ya rhymes cant fit in...as if its a tight glove
6/10
u get no~LUV ~even if~CUPID~shot u in da ass
u couldn't UP ya game even if u was n UPPER class
7/10
n u kno u wont last...u only temporary
neva long lastin like~BLACK HISTORY MONTH~in February
6/10
kinda like cherry...n yea i mean a virgin ya'll
dats wut u r..n im da gun so im poppin ya
5/10


prodigy verse gets a 9/10 but u need 2 fix ya structure and done use so many damn words makes it hard 2 read otha than that nice drop
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