Thread: A Love Story
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Old 08-01-04, 07:50 PM   #7
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it was ok you need better vocab and it seems like a young kids poem cuz love gots way bigger words and is way more complacated.it was a good poem though nice job just elevate a little more and you perfect
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Originally Posted by Lyriclesolja

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