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Doesn't Belong Here.
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Originally Posted by Apo
Saw this trannies picture…the laughter I had was intense,
Ur hearing & site is doing alright…ur just handicapped w/ ur dress sense.
Came across as awkword to me, personally. Not a good opener.
Kid your seriously wack…& renowned for weak drops,
& judging but that denim…you’ll need an IOU to take cheap shots.
haha, funny shit. Funny punch. That's all there is to it.
You’re the weirdest fuck…a mix of gender type being,
& similar to nervous car vandalists he’ll break a sweat when keying.
I could see the concept you were going for, but it just didn't pan out in this one.
With a nasty mug like that…its destined 4 the wall of shame,
& thank “God” DarkLights rhymes to his ego…is a contradiction like his name.
Bit of a personal there, an average bar for you.
unlike ya sweaty face…kid…ur wack rhymes will never shine,
& ur only 14…….but look about 45……..…………………………..
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………………………………………… …inches around the waistline.
Shizzam, another funny personal.
I aint gonna get scientific…coz dumbass u wudnt get what I mean,
but fuck ur mothers nose…or ur papas eyes…………………………………
………………………………………… …………..only ugliness is in ur jeans.
I wouldn't have said 'Only'... just kept it as 'ugliness is in your jeans.' Despite that, it was a funny personal again
Your verse was good for the most part. Some stand out personal, which could likely win you the battle at this point.
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Originally Posted by God
This herb always brings up the rear, spends his life under the covers
Apo drops more periods than a rehab center for crackhead mothers
Sorry man, put this bar was very played. I expect that you knew that, but geez...
Won't catch me upset, this here ain't what they call a fighter's shock
When God matches up against a moderator with fuckin' Writer's Block
This was kinda cathcy to me. Sounds like something you would typically hear in audio format, but I like it none the less.
Heh, bathroom break, but you won't see Apotheosis using the Men's
Only way to get a view of the BS in his head is thru his contact lens
Set-up, was kinda imature - for lack of a better word. The punch was an interesting concept, something i've never seen. I'll give you some credit for originality.
Matched hgimself with his maker, well that was Mr. Mod's 1st mistake
Apo's been headin' down dead end road all his life without the brakes
Cool wordplay thrown in with a light personal. Again, I like it.
Apo talks a big game, claims dopeness and luck with all the femmes
But then his own self-image includes four fuckin' limbs on an M & M
I don't get it. Sorry, I just don't.
You almost came on crap, then crap came on u, but I'm not scornin' it
Sad when a leader gets knocked out the first round of his tournament
You're trailing off here kid.
Royce just wanted to Roll with the big boys, but he forgot his liscense
And RapVerse ain't seen a bigger disaster since the Cuban Missle Crisis!
I really doubt anyone here was around during the Cuban Missle Crisis, and half would have no idea what that was. This is another line that I could only shrug my shoulders at and say 'that's okay'.
'Okay', pretty much sums up your verse. Latin ripped you pretty hard on it, but i won't go that far.
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Vote- Apo, he made me laugh out loud with the waistline punch, and I strongly think he dropped the better verse.
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