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Old 08-02-04, 12:53 AM   #2
Idyllic Queen
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From: Somewhere over the rainbow...
IP:

Well, this definately had a lot of multies...Sometimes it seemed force and I wish your vocab may of came a little stronger but, all in all this was nice. I liked your format and your structure....keep it real...
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