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Old 08-02-04, 02:53 AM   #13
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nice nice,,gee your verse was alot more complex with punches n you had some really original lines,dint much like your opener but thought your next 3 bars were sick..closer was good a bit weak in your verse in the middle but you took his hands dowen..nice job...emerg:your verse was ok but you had no wordplay n your punches were straight not alot of complexity in your verse good vocab..but ya come up short in this battle...http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106
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