Voted For: ATMOSPHERE

ok this is obvious..atmosphere your story line was koo there was only one line i did'nt like"abused"it jus dint sit well with me in the whole scheme of the topical..ok good job..
phatinum..seriously dawg what are you doin this was a topical...your supposed ta write a meaningfull story not incorporate the topic into a battle..ok i don't wanna see any more battle from you ..aight...go read the tutorials your losses are gonna be higher than your post count...
you are gettin better with your structure n format,,thats koo,but you still gotta develop alot of your text style...

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