intensity effect
structure is good...wordplay is pretty good...punch was decent...

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structure is good...wordplay is alright...punch didnt connect...

Overall
both had a good structure...intensity effect had the better wordplay...as well as the harder connecting punch...so basing off of that...intensity effect gets my vote...

VOTE - INTENISTY EFFECT

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