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Old 08-02-04, 05:34 AM   #16
Terumoto
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

aight...

manipulation: overall a decent verse... wordplay was kinda bordering on the lame side, except for ya personal about who he lost battles to... decent flow.. kinda basic but you were sort of trying to include multis.. punches were hit n miss

Marv: some nice original wordplay.. as always from you :P.. punches n' personals were well thought out n' hittin... flow was a tad stretched... I can tell that you rushed that verse so the stretches didnt really bother me...

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