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Old 08-02-04, 06:13 AM   #18
Triple_N
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Decent battle........

Marvous......your structure was horrible, your flow was horrible, and your punches were weak, I thought with lines that long you'd at least have multies but you barely had any of those, you had no personals, nor did you have any wordplay or metaphors, this was a weak disappointing verse, I seen you drop somewhat better before, plain and simple you gotta do better

Manio........good verse, once again your strength was your wordplay and metaphors...those were nice you won this battle with those alone, good complexity...stay at it, punches were ok nothing spectacular, personals you had a few they hit but were jus average strength, your flow was good as well as your structure, you out classed him in every category

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