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Old 08-02-04, 07:00 AM   #17
MaNiPuLaTiOn
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ok.

maku-structure/flow i thought was ok.#
punches were average,nothin really hard hittin
i think your personals were weak...coz i found them to be played/n not very hard hittin.
rascal.all round beta verse really.u came harder with the punches.u had some gud meatas as well..n ur wordplay/creativity was jus a notch above maku

vote rascal

return tha fav.links in my sig
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