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Old 08-02-04, 09:08 AM   #12
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

I gotta give this one to you Ma... I didn't like the fact that you repeated how fake he was but other than that you smoked him. that grate line was on point!



just to expand so her v don't get disqualified...

Ma had better structure in her verse. Punches were a lot harder. the grate line was funny as hell! again, repetitive with the "fake" reference but she won this one hands down.

Caliph's verse was short and choppy, no flow to it. Lines were extremely simple and didn't hit at all. vocab could use some work. no multi's or wordplay. needs to elevate.
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