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Old 08-02-04, 10:58 AM   #13
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Originally Posted by caliph
yo man had a good hard verse but way too fucking long and originality was trash a sniper in the army not original.flow was good as well as structure and i liked the story but the lenghth killed it.8/10better vocab too
flow good flow and struture your originality was real good a hitman and i liked the story too not to long and good shit .your verses were a tie in strenghth but flow gets my vote cuz of his originality.


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