This was goes to sonic for all kinds of reasons: better structure, better flow, better punches (i like that snuff you for loose change line... shyt was funny), and the rhyme overall made a lot more sense. The only thing it seemed to really lack was personals. the structure could be cleaned up a bit but it was ok... enough to get the win. also he needs to step his vocab up a little... try using some multi's. they're not necessary but they add more fuel to the fire... especially in text when it flows well.

Forsaken came with a premature style that probably wouldn't have hit on this site 5 years ago. It wasn't a terrible verse but it's far from being on point. he had some pretty good ideas but he just needed to put them together better. Again, vocab needs work. there were no multi's or real word play. step ya game up playa... you're not too far behind him... and work on that structure.