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Old 08-02-04, 07:37 PM   #25
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Voted For: L.I.

Say my last respects as Washington’s put to rest into a new frame…
He comes up in battles like the beginning of his crew name…
Hmm, i think you could have made it a little more clever. Twas iight

Ran him down to a corner, no escaping me.. now your stuck…
Found a clover in his feecies.. the way he shit outta luck…
once again its FECES, and 1st line was a crappy filler, 2nd line was alright, havent seen that version of 'shit outta luck'

If you wrote your own lines all you’d get was ‘blah dude’…
Sure you deserve props.. for finding dope bars off yahoo…
Love this line

Doc predicted you’d suck at rap, didn’t u see the signs?...
Deliver spasms and disgust after the viewer seizure lines…
dope wordplay


Topical god, king w/ever i set fire'ta throwns its prior & known
plus..... everyones senior shit like you live in retirement homes
ehh, didnt like them. The second line was worded horribly and left no punch in my vision.

dope? strong? please little boy i'll ask you not to lie ta me.....
read ya verse & the rest of ya sig, n try not to think of irony!
pretty nice, workin off the sig

droppin a quick key.....honestly cuz ya not worth my time....
I been thinkin bout u lately, cuz I've had the worst in mind!
Twas alright.. Definantly could have been better though

people think ur decent.....and wash make hollow of good reps
next I'll jump off a fuckin cliff, just cuz u'll follow my foot steps
Hmm. The second line was really nice

I would have to say, LI took this with harder hitting punches, and better wordplay. Washington, you didnt have too hard of punches, and you're wordplay made no sense as a punch to me... i got it as a sentence but nothing to insult him... anyways.

V/LI
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