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Originally Posted by caliph
that was good but it comes accross as a rap still thats ok.i liked it and if thats your first poem your gonna be nice as fuck one day  |
I got the serious rap-writing mentality right now - cause thats all I ever done. Maybe I should stick with it, cause I just got comfortable with the writing style, but just thought this was an interesting piece - and thought I would post it. Thanks for the feed ya'll.