Voted For: demobx
Oooh ight calm down man u went hard it paid off both verses I can dig demo u win wit ur constant punchin and jabbin BL u was good too but this verse had more punches personals and fire u had they fuel jus didn't use it as much as u cud and shud.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982
Both of you shudn't put '/' or '//' at the end of your lines jus structure it so we can get your flow and rhyme BL you have a good structure minus da '//'. demo structure your rhyme betta so it it's easier to read nice verse tho' keep it up watch the structure of BL. return da fav.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982