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Old 08-03-04, 12:42 AM   #39
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S.D. :
had a lotta comdey lines in your verse, which wins battles...had great landed punches.
had some attempts of metas. not a good ammount of multis. but the comdey made up for it.

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had some good punches, no comedy like SD...but had some good personals, use more multis or metas in your next verse, gives is variety, and come more OG. nice try.

vote: SD Original

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