I liked it alot,,and you made some good points,,,the structure was nice as well
I give you a 7 out of 10....But it doesn't matter what I think,,Its what you think,,,but I do like it,,,God bless all...1

I NEED SOME FEED BACK PEOPLE.....http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139368

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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none