Gang... your style is very elementary... I find it very hard to beleive that YOU believe that yo shyt is so gangster.

I hear you talk shit but there aint no sizing me up,
When u battle in lil letters why u scared to speak up?,

ok opener... fix ya structure 5/10

Theres a name for band members...faggot ass huney buns,
Theres normally 4 or 5...but u all them "spices" rolled into 1,

weak... no punch... 3/10

We know u stole that style from capitol...bitch it proves u a biter,
U set urself up for this k.o...u should've named urself...I'M NOT A FIGHTER!,

huh?!!!... 1/10

Big ups to ur recording buddies dawg...no# 2 and no#3,
This guys a joke...jus do ur avy and jack ur buddies,

forced rhyme...i get the punch but it was weak... structure sucked... focus on comp...not his buddies 2/10

And ur punches could never be funny...if u were called Nitrous oxide,
Only way ur entertaining...is when u on rotten.com & we watchin u die,

weak...no punch... filler lines... 1/10

And whats wit ur obsession wit multies...u think it'll make u a more man band?
Coz the truth is...u got no love as a child...
.............momma was too ashamed to hold ur hand,

"a more man band"... nuff said about that... 0/10

One-Man-Band no-man-can flow-as-bad as-this-man,
Rhymes like jam sticky and clammed perhaps u should keep it in the can,

finally decided to try and use multi's... I'll consider that some form of a diss just for the simple fact that you said he was obsessed with multi's and you were "attempting" to show him that anyone could do them...still kinda weak, though. 4/10

overall, not really impressive at all, work on ya structure, multi's, wordplay, and vocab.

OMB...

You had multi's galore in ya verse and ya punches hit a lot harder. At times it seemed as if some of ya multi's were thrown in for effect. EX:

you talk shit, but im a famed pro, you killed a few peeps... but ive slain-mo'
your veins blow, ima punch ya wit skittles on my fist... so you can taste the rain-bow

that line seems filler to me... there were like 1 or two more that i considered to be filler but the structure was on point and flowed well. you went from personals to just talking shyt at times ... *the taste the rainbow line* ... that's cool and all but the impressive stuff is when you got personal with him and stated the facts.

v/OMB... if i had the 100 posts... so here's da feedback