Thanks but I feel it was more then aight,,how about creative,,
and even the structure was well done,,Making it easy to read,
Not to mention the whole story made since while rhyming at the same time,
Not to mention,,I created the whole story from nothing to something,,
That has to count for something,,but I cant knock the way you feel,
but you could have atleast pointed out what you felt wasnt all that good,
After that is done,, Then I will understand what you meant.
Your thoughts are always welcome,,but I believe its more then what you said
no disrespect intended,just the way I feel...God bless all...1

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