Voted For: Lil-trip

I couldn't tell if it was a topical battle or a regular one...
BrotherP- In a battle you need to diss the person you're rhyming against... you gotta get personal and it's gotta be some shyt that people know about to be effective. Again, you came with a simple verse and it wasn't even about him. It doesn't matter if you like the dude or not... in a battle it's all out war and you gotta make us believe that the other dude is straight shyt compared to you.

Lil trip... that first line had me confused as all hell... think you can stretch it any longer?

didn't like that Hard and Black line... filler material... other than that, you got at ya opponent and that's the point I was trying to make to BrotherP...

work on ya structure... ya punches were a lot better and so was your vocab. Brother P used a lot of one syllable endings. That's what I like to call nursery rhymes... cat/bat, fly/try... that shyt's boring to read.

v/lil trip
drop honest votes in my 2 battles please