o.k raw good struture flow and a good drop.you had a good vocab and your second bar was mad funny and your ender was funny also.you had no personals though and a few bars was slacking.state you had a kinda streched struture but good personals and punches hit hard in a few areas only your ender was weak so with better punches you take it and the 3rd bar was funny as hell.

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