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ok both good struture and flow but thug you got kinda off track on the last bar.sinner your getting better but you need to work more on metaphores cuz your disses and punches seriosly lack.thug had some strong punches even though his verse was shorter(its not how much you say its what you say)his vocab was also way better
v/thug
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Originally Posted by Lyriclesolja
oh and by the way dont ask to battle everyone on here knows thats your only defence..
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AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?
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