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Voted For: Da Jokah
Jokah
this mans fruity cuz this bitch slam-tha-cock
got ya bois on yo dick sayin Damn-yur-hot
~Nice punch very true 7.5/10
yo that niggas wrong cuz its like u a freezah
cold as hell..shrinkage in ya dick u couldnt pleez ha
~Could of been better, but decent 6/10
nigga take a breath..count to 3..now tell me who tha best
u close to death..u from La huh..well ummm Fuck Tha West
~Attempted personal, coulda been better 6.5/10
yo Kan-The-West-Spit?? tell me cuz all westsiders drop
dam-yo-best-shit?? thats nasty nigga..ahh just STOP
~Okay multi...but a weak punch 6.5/10
DROP ya head..well ma Gun goes KABOOM
Pop tha fed..no luda shit...silence wen i enter tha room
~Played, weak, attempted a multi 6/10
hair like luda-cris..na nigga ma hair stay fadded
umm who-this-bitch..ha nigga my flow stays creative
~self glorification, a big no-no 5/10
my flow is crazy..no wunda they got me in a straight jacket
punches maybe...i aint to old but my drops r staight classick
~More self glorification...you could of used those lines to drop punches... 5/10
u love dat girl well dat girl loves..she aint want a lil bitch
she hugs me ..iam a thug b..and she suck on ma dick a lil bit
~You aren't a thug..filler... 5/10
so back da fuck off me nigga or ill take this sadam style
holy shit i gotta stop cuz my verse.....is so-dam wild
~Very weak last 8 lines and crap closer...more self glorification 5/10
ruff_tuff_thug
yo i wanna be caught red handed killin yo bitch ass
i'll die first before i ever let a mutha fuckin snitch pass
fuck wit me and not stopping you'll get a muthafuckin smash
~No punch...played...weak opener 5/10
fuck you da jokah you little biatch or else ha ha
you aint gon be asleep because of that fuckin la la
~ha ha, la la....very wack...get creative dude 4/10
nigga if this is a risk you gonna take then
i'll make no mistake to let every one know that your a fake
~Attempted punch 6.5/10
first if you fuck wit me you gon go through the worst
you know you could no not could would end up in a hearse
nigga its your turn and lets see your stupid ass verse.
~Weak closer...no punch...self glorification on the first line 5/10
Da Jokah=72.5/90
ruff_tuff_thug=25.5/40
Vote=Da Jokah
reason:Jokah came with harder punches a better flow n structure....ruff_tuff_thug, your verse would of been much better if it had more punches and shit that wasnt played...it had a nice structure n flow...but no punches
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