Banned: Cheating
From: DC (aka murda capitol) 501 boys |
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IP:
aight tis how it is this battle was ok but Mat extend ur lines and work on ya structure
XXX ur opener was kinda weak
i got a lame ass mc on my ass trying to bring me down
but you cant touch me,yet alone my crown
(not a good enough opener it looks like u cut some of the line off)
so stop trying,sit in your hole and cower
cuz im unbreakable,think of me as the tower
(Dont say hole its kinda gay and what tower)
now here we come to your final hour
so forget the game and move on ya coward
(pretty good ending) overall- 5/10
XXX
Taking a look at this fools posts…u’ld notice he a retard,
U diss him he gets confused..his brain is just like a lizards
son,u battleing me has put an end to ur kiddy dreams........
cos i eat up weak mc's & my spits gon make you scream
(Nice punch line on ur second bar)
ur shit didnt make sense..you fucking dumb..boy no offense
u shudn't have insisted on spitting first,cos u just a lil twerp
ur structure really sucks..i think its hight time u duck
and u so outta luck,therre aint no room for an ugly fuck
(1st bar didnt rhyme nice touch on da 2nd)
the rules said 10 lines..but i c u too foolish and blind
u r lyrically slacking boo..guess its too much of jafool
im dont with this fake,cos he nothing but a hoecake
(nice ending where told him 10 lines) 8/10
v/XXX
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