XXX got this hands down...

Mat, you came off weak from the beginning and it didn't get any better as it went along. where's the word play? multi's? personals and punches? like the other kat said, you can rhyme but you seriously need to elevate ya game. Get some better vocab and "think outside the box". try using double meanings... but slow down killer... fix that structure first before you start wrecking ya brain on everything else.

XXX... you had an overall better structure... still needs work, though. Personals and punches were better. I found no wordplay or multi's in ya verse but it was still better than Mat's.

For the record... Matw usually replies with a rhyme... i've seen his other posts... I actually liked his response a lot better than his original battle rhyme! ( I also think it's good that he takes the opportunity to keep practicing in his responses ... but that won't win the battles if you drop weak in them.)

v/XXX