Voted For: Quake

ite quake wins wit for good wordplay --Nah you watch 2 much TV espcially Oprah the way your battle record is Win~free (Winfrey)||..........
and Phatinum stepping to me will leave you shaking like a bobble~head||
||Dawgs claims he hard but only if somehow he swollows~lead||
..........good meta the first line, but u coulda worded the secound one better, but i knew what u were gettin at and thats decent wordplay

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other cat

yo im a tooth ache not your ordaniry milkshake
now i battle till the earth quake look around
.......an attempt at a personal, nice try but wasn't a punch when u did it, jus said his name randomly

~~~your stucture is way fucked up, we write in bars, other guys was stretched , but yours was jus fucked. work on personals and ya structure, read the league championship battle to get a better idea on how this is all done, both of you.
return the favor
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