Voted For: J_Trooper

J-Trooper you won this..

Your stucture was better, lines matched up and evenly spaced.. Flow was on point, the rhymes connected with rhythm. Punchlines in almost every bar, most of them connected.. Opener was better, and Closer.

Basically no hate, but papper 1 u should elevate a little ..

nice battle.. can u return favor wit a drop in mine? thanx.. peace
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