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Old 08-03-04, 05:13 PM   #23
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Voted For: 7*0*8*

Ok.. Ill bring, your structure was horrible, and made me not even wanna read it. but when I did, you didn't have any puches or good lines. Your opener was not that good, or you closer.. 708, you had nice stucture, yo flow was better and you came with some punches, so in the end yo verse was overall better.. V/708

Can you return the favor with a drop in mines? thanx..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139363