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Old 08-03-04, 07:52 PM   #14
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Voted For: Lekchur

Lekchure:
Ya Team Is Slaughtered, 'Wash This Girl' Off The Board Like 'Cleanin Daughters'
So Everyone Watch Me 'Drop Hot' Like A 'Pot' Of 'Steamin Water'! ok opener...5/10

My Dreamins Hotter, Than You, This Fool I'll Bury Em
Since The Only People 'Feelin Shh'! Are 'School Librarians'!
creative...7/10

The Tool Barbarian, I Spit Flows And Send Handy Clips
And Lekchur Finna 'Cut Ya Assistance' Quicker Than 'Andy Dick'! nice multis...6.5/10

You Candy Prick, I'll Knock Ya Kin And Shock Ya Chin!
Then Take The 'O Out Ya Name' Cuz 'HT' Lek 'Ought To Win''!
4/10

I'll Stop Ya Sins, It's Like 'Ham' When I Start 'Glazin This Man'
Hot, People Wouldnt 'Call On You' In Rap If You Were 'Raisin Ya Hand'! nice closer.... 7/10

29.5/50....u had some good multi's verse was ok punches could have hit harder...

Hotshh!:

Lekchur Who?? Ya 1st verse'll be Dodi, Caca*
Ya crew be like dude get a clue he gotcha
Cause ya punches dont connect like woozy boxers

not bad could have kept that extra line tho...6/10

But its no Difference.U couldnt come close if we was Neighbors
Watch Me rip Lek like pregnant vagina during labor
weak punch...4/10

But ima hater so im coming hard like this bitch* is off the meter
Ill slap lekchur out his coma to bring em into seizures
kinda weak...4/10

Ill let u live just so ill can kill you tonite
And by day 2 youll neva make it back to this site
kinda weak again...3/10

He dont know he gonna lose so ima give em the shoe
Cause he only logged on thinking this was Rhythm and Blues!*
ok closer...4.5/10

21.5/50.... didn't really have any strong punches, structure was off with some short lines and some long ones. Flow got thrown off with that extra line in the beginning. not bad though

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