Voted For: KroNuz

haha kronuz that verse was great u had real personals and every single punch in there it hard no fillers flow was good structure dont mean shit to me.nice lines there i dont do battles anymore in text but that is good.

sc some of your things were fake personals like the one bout wat he said wen his friend said he was gay.thats like wen u used that personal on me sayin i tried to join hwcs.but that dont matter here.u had a lot of fillers.no personals.flow was good.structure means nuthing to me.ur punches didnt really hit hard at all weak verse.but u said u couldnt think of anything soo...if u say thats why mus be true less its an excuse.NEVER explain ur lines ever that makes ur verse sound weak and i got those punches u didnt really need to explain them cept on line 7.aight so weak drop there

v/kronuz