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Old 08-03-04, 11:40 PM   #12
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Voted For: BlackMagik

Andy

you think u can beat me cus im new,
guess what im gonna fuk u, me and my crew
--Wack, no punch...retarded line 3/10
im so good you even like my style
im bout 2 take ur black ass and walk it down the green mile.
--Wack again....if it would of had a better line the green mile line coulda been a good punch 4/10
im the king of dropping verses im the king of 2 liners
dont get in my way cus ill fuk u up like micheal myers
--wack...no punch...self glorification...crap 2/10

Overall: 9/30
Definitely elevate try to throw some punches in your verse it really helps

Not going into evaluating BM's verse....Andy, that was a wack drop..eleveate, throw punches, use multis even

Vote=Black Magic, better structure, more punches
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