Seven- i mean... you was rhyming fine..
the hook- WHAT DA FUCK -_-...
nice job on it... but just a big style difference then what im used to... it was better then alot of the garbage on soundclick tho,, so two thumbs up for dat
.. nice job on the rhyme scheme on the second verse.. fiirst verse wass iiight.. wasent much of a flow on that one.. but it was decent..
overall minus the chorus -_-... good shit
