Voted For: C_R_E_A_M

im b0ut ta merk dis kid,discipline em like my child_
hurt em wit a verse s0 h0t his reply will 0nly be mild_
--Self glorifiaction for real..dont do it 4/10
peep my style,its up ta date like fitteds and tims_
and my bars'll be like needles,yo skin is what im stickin em in_
--More self glorifyin 4/10
typen on a keyboardN,still merkin like im usen a pen n pad_
u like da grinch on christmas...my presents[presence] is maken u mad_
--Attempted wordplay that wasnt self glorifyin so 6/10
shyt! dis a eazy 0ne,i can spit flows hollow_
and ya momz an eazy 0ne,she can spit and swallow_
--Weak...played...5/10
and duke..f0r ya blood i g0t crips ta follow_
dat'll leave u dead,wit no top like sleepy hollow_
--weak...not a good punch..no good wordplay 5/10

Phatinum

Not evaluating lines..because well...you cant tell where they cut off...your structure is wack as fuck work on it...lost you the battle son, elevate def

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