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Old 08-04-04, 02:30 AM   #12
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personals won this battle,n they werent even that original the canada lines are ok but i promise you,ya try that on a vet n not a noob your jus gonna get ripped..your opener was your best line..n your closer was decent..but kinda fucked structure...keep it up though overall ok verse..
umm.first verse was not good..your best line was the personal; bout da arctic seas...that was koo but not enough for the win...
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