Please RTV
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~times-up like jadakiss, over like lil flip~
~and like a preview of a movie, you'll get-a-clip~
~flippin-ya-lip too much, leave you wit cuts-and-gash~
~sluts-get-smashed, stuck like immature gurls shaving they mustache~

^^^ I always thought multi-rhyme rappers used too much filler in their lyrics...and this is what you have done
It is not really hitting Mic hard at all...it sounds fancy. But, you're supposed to be attackin him.

~show you the definition-of-pain, let these punches poisen and manifest~
~ill be damned if you rest, cause im leave you smokin like canibus~
~and-a-fist in ya nose, cause bitch i got the scariest-visions~
~leave ya rhymes watered down like i sprayed ya raps wit various-liquids~
^^^Decent imagery...but the punch isn't hard at all...

yo faggot lets get somethin straight I AM NOT THE ONE TO PROVOKE//
after im done with chu, ruff tuff thug's homo dick ride'll be ya lone vote//
i portray greatness, u on the other hand just rely on subliminal things//
get blown to smitherines ya linez culdnt cut me if i took a nap on a gullotine//


^^ That's more like it...punches hit harder than dukes...


Vote: Mic Wrecker