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Old 08-04-04, 12:06 PM   #14
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this guy jumps crews like he a racehorse..gave him tha boot...
only reason he the "general"..cos he likes fuckin his troops...

^^ Not so sure that punch sets up correctly...do generals really "fuck" their troops?...iono...not really effective in my opinion

decent

ima smack this wack middleweight..im tha champ sugar~ray~tonight...
only way u gonna win this fight...is try and wreck~the~mic...or bite...

^^ Blah...not feeling it...and the bite the mic line is not creatively done at all

bitch u a herb..u breathe backwards...n need watering alot...
here..ive jus pissed on u...now ive left u destined to rot.....

^^ Lackluster closer...where is the dope wordplay to set up the punch?...it rather fizzled out


listen pussy u comin at a soldier, you aint got no clue who u dealin wit//
i culd slap you wit a dictionairy an u still wuldnt no how hard my words hit//

^^^ More creative than the other cat...but it still didn't hit that hard

wen i started that crew there was a meaning behind it, but it went to waste wit chu//i feel sorry fa ya leaders, how they gonna get u ta try n fit n my shoes//

^^^ Flow is off here...


this homo nigga keeps his ass lubed up lovin the penetratin//
but he proves that his tongue is bitch look at his mouth verbally menstratin'

^^ Hard closer...but it lacked creativity...where's the meta? the wordplay...

Vote: Wrecker...barely...but had better punches...and more creativity
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